poem (not good with names)

i know it sucks xD but work with me xD
c&c please

If my Heart could be walked,
you would walk a wasteland of pain.
No one would have talked,
My Love has been Slain.

I'm left with a beat less Heart,
Why'd you lie?
It's left me in pain,
Here i Die.

Let this be the note,
that you never forget.
they lay the death coat.

No more birthday gifts,
just flowers at the grave.
as my coffin lifts...
Can i be Saved?

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