poem (not good with names)
>> Monday, January 5, 2009
i know it sucks xD but work with me xD
c&c please
If my Heart could be walked,
you would walk a wasteland of pain.
No one would have talked,
My Love has been Slain.
I'm left with a beat less Heart,
Why'd you lie?
It's left me in pain,
Here i Die.
Let this be the note,
that you never forget.
they lay the death coat.
No more birthday gifts,
just flowers at the grave.
as my coffin lifts...
Can i be Saved?
you would walk a wasteland of pain.
No one would have talked,
My Love has been Slain.
I'm left with a beat less Heart,
Why'd you lie?
It's left me in pain,
Here i Die.
Let this be the note,
that you never forget.
they lay the death coat.
No more birthday gifts,
just flowers at the grave.
as my coffin lifts...
Can i be Saved?
2 COMMENTS OF DOOM!:
awwwww! that is so cool in a sweet kinda way. keep writing more poems. you ROCK at it!!!!!
sorry the last one was me! but seriously keep writing.
-Anna
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